sorry
학생이 쓴 원문
I am so sorry every ealry in the morning.
I cannot take your call today because my grandmother died yesterday. So I'm in Masan, which is my hometown. I will be here until my grandmother buries under the ground.
I saw lots of tear of my family. But I didn't cry out.
I'm just very tired. I think the reason why I'm tired is because I saw the tear.
Now I have to go in. And sorry again not for taking your call.
see you Thursday!
강사 첨삭
Hi there!
I am sorry to hear that your grandmother died. I hope that you will accept my sympathy. I know how it feels to loose someone who is really dear to you. It\'s fine if you are not taking my calls. I understand you. I hope that in due time all of your family members will accept this fate. Take care always and I would be praying for you that everything would be fine already.
T.Nica^^
I am so sorry every ealry in the morning.
>>I am so sorry every early morning of our class.I cannot take your call today because my grandmother died yesterday.
>>Correct=(
So I\'m in Masan, which is my hometown.
>>Correct.
I will be here until my grandmother buries under the ground.
>>I will be here until my grandmother\'s burial day.I saw lots of tear of my family.
>>I saw a lot of my family members who are crying in anguish.
But I didn\'t cry out.
>>CorrectI\'m just very tired.
>>CorrectI think the reason why I\'m tired is because I saw the tear.>>I think the reason why I\'m tired is because I saw them crying.Now I have to go in.
>>CorrectAnd sorry again not for taking your call.
>>Correctsee you Thursday!
>>See you on Thursday!
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