sorry~
학생이 쓴 원문
Good afternoon~
I'm sorry to absent a class.
I have some task.
It's a naming ceremony.
It's naming a vessel. It's means vessel has a identification card.
It's like baby has their own name.It's important event in shipbuilding company. so I have to attend the event.
I have to leave my office now~
have a good weekend and see you next week.
^ ^
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름], here are some corrections from your composition.
I'm sorry to absent a class.
>>> I'm sorry for being absent in our class.
I have some task.
>>> I had some things to finish.
It's a naming ceremony.
>>> it was an awarding ceremony.
It's naming a vessel. it means vessel has an identification card.
>>> We gave a name to a vessel. Now the vessel has a label.
It's like a baby has their own name. It's important event in ship building company. So, I have to attend the event.
>>> It was like a baby having its own name. It was an important event in the engineering department of the company so, I had to attend the event.
I have to leave my office now.
>>> i have to leave the office now.
have a good wekend and see you next week.--- (You too )
>>>> VERY GOOD!
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