sorry~

2010-02-05 · 첨삭 강사 rich

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Good afternoon~ I'm sorry to absent a class. I have some task. It's a naming ceremony. It's naming a vessel. It's means vessel has a identification card. It's like baby has their own name.It's important event in shipbuilding company. so I have to attend the event. I have to leave my office now~ have a good weekend and see you next week. ^ ^

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Hi [이름], here are some corrections from your composition.   I'm sorry to absent a class. >>> I'm sorry for being absent in our class.   I have some task. >>> I had some things to finish.   It's a naming ceremony. >>> it was an awarding ceremony.   It's naming a vessel. it means vessel has an identification card. >>> We gave a name to a vessel. Now the vessel has a label.   It's like a  baby has their own name. It's important event in ship building company. So, I have to attend the event. >>> It was like a baby having its own name. It was an important event in the engineering department of the company so, I had to attend the event.   I have to leave my office now. >>> i have to leave the office now.   have a  good wekend and see you next week.--- (You too ) >>>> VERY GOOD!

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