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2014-02-07 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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Hi Nina i'm so sorry. I left my cell phone in my car. So i could't take your phone call. Anyway if i recevied a complain from customer i must to write supplir porblem sheet Then customer comfirm the SPS and it will be finished.

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Good afternoon [이름]! Oh! Happy Friday! Yipee! Thank you so much for doing your homework. I do understand, I hope that you are having a fun day. I am excited to hear your ideas and stories next week. Take a lot of rest and enjoy your weekend! See you! Teacher Nina   Hi Nina>> Correct! >> OR: Hi Nina! >> OR: Hi, Nina.i\'m so sorry. >> Correct! ( Capitalization: I ^^) I left my cell phone in my car. >> Correct! So i could\'t take your phone call.>> So I wasn\'t able to answer your call.Anyway if i recevied a complain from customer i must to write supplir porblem sheet >> Did you mean: Anyway, if I receive a complain from a customer, I must write the supplier\'s problem. >> OR: Anyway, if I receive a complain from a customer I should accomplish the supplier\'s problem sheet.Then customer comfirm the SPS and it will be finished. >> And then, the customer will confirm the SPS and it will be finished.

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