Sorry~
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi Nina
i'm so sorry. I left my cell phone in my car. So i could't take your phone call.
Anyway if i recevied a complain from customer i must to write supplir porblem sheet
Then customer comfirm the SPS and it will be finished.
강사 첨삭
Good afternoon [이름]!
Oh! Happy Friday!
Yipee! Thank you so much for doing your homework.
I do understand, I hope that you are having a fun day.
I am excited to hear your ideas and stories next week.
Take a lot of rest and enjoy your weekend! See you!
Teacher Nina
Hi Nina>> Correct!
>> OR: Hi Nina!
>> OR: Hi, Nina.i\'m so sorry.
>> Correct! ( Capitalization: I ^^)
I left my cell phone in my car.
>> Correct!
So i could\'t take your phone call.>> So I wasn\'t able to answer your call.Anyway if i recevied a complain from customer i must to write supplir porblem sheet
>> Did you mean: Anyway, if I receive a complain from a customer, I must write the supplier\'s problem.
>> OR: Anyway, if I receive a complain from a customer I should accomplish the supplier\'s problem sheet.Then customer comfirm the SPS and it will be finished.
>> And then, the customer will confirm the SPS and it will be finished.
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