Sorry~~

2011-03-28 · 첨삭 강사 Verna

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Hi~ my teacher,Veruna~^^ I really sorry that I couldn't receive your call. Actully, I was supposed to have medical examination on last friday morning. This is just regular checkup what our company gives the staffs once a year. So I went to the medical center and had that. I did turn off my cell phone and keep in my locker While I had the examination. However, there were so many examinee there. I think Friday is why there were many people. So, my examination was finished too late. I had to get back to work without lunch time. I thought that the examination will finish before at 11. So i didn't postpone your calss. I really really sorry.. I saw your message in this websit. I feel sorry and thank. I hope you understand me. Have a great night.. See you tomorrow~

강사 첨삭

Hi Jane,

         Oh, I뭢 glad you sent me this message. It made me less worried. I understand your situation don뭪 worry. I just missed you last Friday. I hope to talk to you later! Happy Monday!

-Verna-

Hi~ my teacher,Veruna~^^
>> Hi~ my teacher, Verna~^^
I really sorry that i didn't receive your call.

>> I뭢 really sorry that I didn't receive your call.
Actully, I was supposed to have medical examination on last friday morning.

>> Actually, I was supposed to have medical examination last Friday morning.

This is just regular checkup what my company gives to staffs.

>> This is just regular check up that my company gives to staffs.

So I went to the medical center and had that.

>> So I went to the medical center and had it.

I did turn off my cell phone and kept my locker While I had examination.

>> I turned off my cell phone and kept it on my locker while I had the examination.

However, there were so many examinee there.

>> However, there were so many patients there.

I think Friday is why there were many people. 

>> I think it뭩 Friday that뭩 why there were many people. 

So, my examination was finished too late.

>>Correct

I had to get back to work without lunch time. 

>> I had to get back to work without lunch break.

I thought that the examination will finish before at 11. So i didn't postpone your calss.

>> I thought that the examination will finish before at 11.

>>Correct

So i didn't postpone your calss.

>> So I didn't postpone your class.

I really really sorry..

>>I뭢 really sorry.
I saw your message in this websit.

>> I saw your message in this website.

I feel sorriness and thanks.

>>I feel sorry and grateful.
I hope you understand me.

>>Correct
Have a great night..

>>Correct
See you tomorrow~

>>Correct

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