Sorry~
학생이 쓴 원문
I was really sorry yesterday.
However, I'm not sure today as well.
Because I have to prepare some food for students who study at night.
So I seem not to be able to take a bus for leaving work at original time.
After dinner, we drank some beer with chicken.
and my seniors talked to me about the way I work well here.
I was a little impressed.
But now where are they ?
I have many things to do.
I'm confused. ㅠ.ㅠ
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
I am glad to know that everything is working well for you at work.
It is totally the opposite of what we thought it was.
I'm relieved to know that you are doing fine at work and that your coworkers are treating you nicely.
Working is difficult sometimes, but it's part of it.
I don't think there isn't anything easy when we want to earn for a living.
I know you can do it so, fighting!? ^^
-Tiny^0^
I was really sorry yesterday.
>>correctHowever, I'm not sure today as well.
>>correctBecause I have to prepare some food for students who study at night.
>>correct
So I seem not to be able to take a bus for leaving work at original time.
>> So I seem not to be able to take a bus going home at original time.
After dinner, we drank some beer with chicken.
>>correctand my seniors talked to me about the way I work well here.
>>correct
>> And my seniors talked to me about the way I work well here.
>> My seniors talked to me about the way I work well here. (better)
I was a little impressed.
>>correctBut now where are they?
>>correctI have many things to do.
>>correctI'm confused. ㅠ.ㅠ
>>correct
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