Sorry, Ali

2010-11-26 · 첨삭 강사 ali

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I couldn't anwer your call yesterday because of my two son. Around at 6 my little son woke up and started to cry and then the older son woke up too. Sometimes they make me do not anything. I managed to calm them down and checked my phone. I found that you called me 4 times.ㅜ.ㅜ;; So today, I work up at 4 O'clock. I am ready for your call. However, my older son woke up just a few minite ago. He is playing a mobile game quietly next me now. Anyway I am sorry that I missed last lesson. And I belive you will understand. I am happy to study English with you. Have a wonderful day!

강사 첨삭

Oh, that's why, Ms. [Name], don't worry, I totally understand. Your two boys are adorable- true, but indeed, they take most of your time, huh? =) Well that's the beauty of being a Mom, you can have a taste of bliss and disaster, ha ha ^_^. Say hello to your sons for me and I really hope you enjoy the weekend with them. Hey, good luck on that TOEIC test of yours, too. See you in class! Ali   I couldn't anwer your call yesterday because of my two son. >>> I couldn't anwer your call yesterday because of my two sons. Around at 6 my little son woke up and started to cry and then the older son woke up too. >>> At around 6 my little son woke up and started to cry and then the older son woke up too. Sometimes they make me do not anything. >>> Sometimes they make me do nothing. >>>OR: Sometimes, they don't make me do anything.  I managed to calm them down and checked my phone. >>> Correct I found that you called me 4 times.>>> OK >>>OR: I saw that you called me up 4 times.So today, I work up at 4 O'clock. >>> So today, I woke up at 4 O'clock. I am ready for your call. >>> Correct However, my older son woke up just a few minite ago. >>> However, my older son woke up just a few minutes ago. He is playing a mobile game quietly next me now.>>> He is playing a mobile game quietly next to me now.Anyway I am sorry that I missed last lesson. >>> Anyway I am sorry that I missed our last lesson. And I belive you will understand. >>> Correct I am happy to study English with you. >>> Correct Have a wonderful day! >>> Correct

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