Sorry, Ali
학생이 쓴 원문
I couldn't anwer your call yesterday because of my two son. Around at 6 my little son woke up and started to cry and then the older son woke up too. Sometimes they make me do not anything. I managed to calm them down and checked my phone. I found that you called me 4 times.ㅜ.ㅜ;;
So today, I work up at 4 O'clock. I am ready for your call. However, my older son woke up just a few minite ago. He is playing a mobile game quietly next me now.
Anyway I am sorry that I missed last lesson. And I belive you will understand. I am happy to study English with you. Have a wonderful day!
강사 첨삭
Oh, that's why, Ms. [Name], don't worry, I totally understand. Your two boys are adorable- true, but indeed, they take most of your time, huh? =) Well that's the beauty of being a Mom, you can have a taste of bliss and disaster, ha ha ^_^. Say hello to your sons for me and I really hope you enjoy the weekend with them. Hey, good luck on that TOEIC test of yours, too. See you in class!
Ali
I couldn't anwer your call yesterday because of my two son.
>>> I couldn't anwer your call yesterday because of my two sons.
Around at 6 my little son woke up and started to cry and then the older son woke up too.
>>> At around 6 my little son woke up and started to cry and then the older son woke up too.
Sometimes they make me do not anything.
>>> Sometimes they make me do nothing.
>>>OR: Sometimes, they don't make me do anything.
I managed to calm them down and checked my phone.
>>> Correct
I found that you called me 4 times.>>> OK
>>>OR: I saw that you called me up 4 times.So today, I work up at 4 O'clock.
>>> So today, I woke up at 4 O'clock.
I am ready for your call.
>>> Correct
However, my older son woke up just a few minite ago.
>>> However, my older son woke up just a few minutes ago.
He is playing a mobile game quietly next me now.>>> He is playing a mobile game quietly next to me now.Anyway I am sorry that I missed last lesson.
>>> Anyway I am sorry that I missed our last lesson.
And I belive you will understand.
>>> Correct
I am happy to study English with you.
>>> Correct
Have a wonderful day!
>>> Correct
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