Sorry Chelsea
학생이 쓴 원문
Good Morning Chelsea
I miss my stop this morning in the bus.
It's because that I waw a beautiful girl in my web cafe.
Her name is Audrey Hepburn and I am astonished with her old bright face.
She helped starving children and hungry people
and made fund-raising for the countries.
Anyway, I punish me to do not see any wep page for today.
강사 첨삭
Good Morning to you too^^
It\'s okay, don\'t worry about it.
I hope you were not late for work.
It is really awesome to see other people hepl those people in need.
Anyway, I made some corrections, if you have some questions just ask me in our class.
I\'ll call you tomorrow.
Have a great day and take care^^
~xoxo Chelsea
Good Morning Chelsea>> CORRECT^^
>> Good Morning Chelsea!I miss my stop this morning in the bus.
>> I miss the bus stop this morning.It\'s because that I waw a beautiful girl in my web cafe.>> It\'s because I saw a beautiful girl in my web cafe.Her name is Audrey Hepburn and I am astonished with her old bright face.>> CORRECT^^She helped starving children and hungry people and made fund-raising for the countries.>> She helped starving children, hungry people and she also had a fund-raising for other countries.Anyway, I punish me to do not see any wep page for today.
>> Anyway, I punish myself by not seeing any web page today.
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