Sorry Chelsea

2014-01-23 · 첨삭 강사 Chelsea

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Good Morning Chelsea I miss my stop this morning in the bus. It's because that I waw a beautiful girl in my web cafe. Her name is Audrey Hepburn and I am astonished with her old bright face. She helped starving children and hungry people and made fund-raising for the countries. Anyway, I punish me to do not see any wep page for today.

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Good Morning to you too^^ It\'s okay, don\'t worry about it. I hope you were not late for work. It is really awesome to see other people hepl those people in need. Anyway, I made some corrections, if you have some questions just ask me in our class. I\'ll call you tomorrow. Have a great day and take care^^ ~xoxo Chelsea Good Morning Chelsea>> CORRECT^^ >> Good Morning Chelsea!I miss my stop this morning in the bus. >> I miss the bus stop this morning.It\'s because that I waw a beautiful girl in my web cafe.>> It\'s because I saw a beautiful girl in my web cafe.Her name is Audrey Hepburn and I am astonished with her old bright face.>> CORRECT^^She helped starving children and hungry people and made fund-raising for the countries.>> She helped starving children, hungry people and she also had a fund-raising for other countries.Anyway, I punish me to do not see any wep page for today. >> Anyway, I punish myself by not seeing any web page today.

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