Sorry, Ella
학생이 쓴 원문
I'm sorry for my absence, yesterday.
I caught a cold and I was sick.
So, when you called me, I was sleeping.
You called me four times!!! So sorry again.
have a nice weekend and see you next class.
Bye-bye :D
강사 첨삭
Hello there [이름],
I'm sorry to hear that you were sick. Thank you also for informing me. I missed you in the class. I'll see you later. Take care!
-Ella-
I'm sorry for my absence, yesterday.
>> Correct
>> I'm sorry for being absent yesterday.I caught a cold and I was sick.
>>CorrectSo, when you called me, I was sleeping.
>>CorrectYou called me four times!!! So sorry again.
>> You called me four times!!! I'm so sorry again.have a nice weekend and see you next class.
>>Have a nice weekend! See you in our next class.Bye-bye :D
>>Correct
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