sorry ella!

2011-05-02 · 첨삭 강사 Connie

학생이 쓴 원문

hi , how do you do? today i just want to play with my friend! hahaha i ask the personal center that can i have a rest today but thay answer yet maybe they say yes ! kkk see you next time so sorry, next time take we again, bye~

강사 첨삭

Hi, my dear Min Jeong!! It's okay. Maybe you are stressed. Once in a while we need to take a break.hehehe.  See you on Wednesday. xoxo, ~teacher Ella hi , how do you do?>>CORRECT >>Hi, how do you do?today i just want to play with my friend!>>CORRECT >>Today, I just want to play with my friend.hahahai ask the personal center that can i have a rest today>>I asked the personal center if I can have a rest today.but thay answer yet>>But the haven't answered yet.maybe they say yes ! kkk>>Maybe they'll say yes. Kkk.see you next time>>CORRECT >>See you next time.so sorry, next time take we again, bye~ >>I'm so sorry. Next time we can talk again. Bye.

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