sorry for my laziness
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello from Amber
I'm so sorry for skipping our classes in this month.
At first , I thought I was so busy that I coudn't find any time to have a class with you. but in few minute,I changed my mind to make some time for me,our class. Because I have surely Reason to study and I felt I made a excuse for my laziness. So I'll try to have some time for our class more than before.
But we need to change the contents for our class-not the given article from pweng.net but my job manuel.
My job manuel is actually for users(visiters) in my office. Sometimes, I need to explain my office facilities to people visiting my office for their uses. In about 1month, some foreign visiters will come to my office and I'll have to greet
the delegation on behalf of my company. So I need to be ready for that in advance.
So I hope to excercise that kind of situation with you. I'll have some script for that the time before our class. and we can talk about the script or that situation I can be faced
강사 첨삭
Hi Amber! I am sooo glad that you\'ve decided to continue the class and not to put it on hold anymore. I truly understand that you\'re a very busy career woman and answering my call everyday is somewhat difficult to manage the time. But you actually made a good decision to just continue it. Good job! And regarding your job manual, I\'ll be a help for you. Take care and talk to you soon then.
Teacher Lara
Here are my corrections for you:
Hello from Amber.
>> CorrectI\'m so sorry for skipping our classes in this month.>>I\'m so sorry for skipping our classes for this month.
At first , I thought I was so busy that I coudn\'t find any time to have a class with you.
>> Correct
but in few minute,I changed my mind to make some time for me,our class.
>> But after a few minutes, I suddenly changed my mind to continue out class instead.
Because I have surely Reason to study and I felt I made a excuse for my laziness.
>> Because I surely have a reason to study and I felt I made an excuse for my laziness.
So I\'ll try to have some time for our class more than before.>> CorrectBut we need to change the contents for our class-not the given article from pweng.net but my job manuel.>> But we need to change the course of our class, not the given article from pweng.net, but about my job manual.My job manuel is actually for users(visiters) in my office.
>> My job manual is actually for users(visiters) in my office
Sometimes, I need to explain my office facilities to people visiting my office for their uses.>> Sometimes, I need to explain the company\'s facilities to people visiting our office for their usage.
In about 1month, some foreign visiters will come to my office and I\'ll have to greet the delegation on behalf of my company.
>> In about 1 month, some foreign visitors will come to my office and I\'ll have to greet the delegates on behalf of my company.
So I need to be ready for that in advance.
>> CorrectSo I hope to excercise that kind of situation with you.
>> Correct
I\'ll have some script for that the time before our class. and we can talk about the script or that situation I can be faced
>> I\'ll prepare some scripts before the start of our class and we can talk about the script or the possible situation that I might be facing.
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