sorry for postponing

2013-05-01 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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hello teacher~ I'm [이름]. Good evening! ah~ what time is it in pilippine? yesterday you know i had a good time with my juniors. actually I don't have enough time. :( I bought my juniors some chickens. like this, Colonel whom I once worked for is willing to buy some food. so I have to hurry! we can talk maybe next time! Q1 - She _speaks__ several languages. Q2 - He _talked_ for about an hour. Q3 - He _talks_ a lot of nonsense. Q4 - It was an interesting __Either could be used__. Q5 - He's always __talking__ behind people's backs. Q6 - If it's worrying you, you should __speak__ your mind. Q7 - There's a serious problem- I think we should _talk_. Q8 - We _Either_ things over and everything's OK between us now. Q9 - It's just _talk_- they'll never actually do it. Q10 - She _speaks_ in her sleep.

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Hi there [이름]!! Thank you for doing your homework. You did a good job! I think this homework was easy for you. I was able to notice that last night you were really having a great time with your juniors because your voice sounded happy.Actually it\'s already past six o\'clock in the Philippines.I am sure that you will have a great day today.I am looking forward to talk to you tomorrow.Please go over the corrections I gave you for your improvement.Enjoy the rest of the day! Teacher Nina Here are my corrections for you: hello teacher~ >> Hello teacher.I\'m [이름]. >> Correct! Good evening! >> Correct!ah~ what time is it in pilippine? >> What time is it in the Philippines?yesterday you know i had a good time with my juniors. >> You know,I had a good time with my juniors yesterday.actually I don\'t have enough time. :( >> Actually I didn\'t have enough time.I bought my juniors some chickens. >> I bought some chicken for my juniors.like this, Colonel whom I once worked for is willing to buy some food. >> The situation today is that a Colonel who I once worked for is willing to buy some food for me.so I have to hurry! >> Correct!we can talk maybe next time!>> Maybe we can talk next time.Q1 - She _speaks__ several languages. >> Correct!Q2 - He _talked_ for about an hour. >> Correct!/SPOKE Q3 - He _talks_ a lot of nonsense. >> Correct!Q4 - It was an interesting __Either could be used__. >> talk Q5 - He\'s always __talking__ behind people\'s backs. >> Correct!Q6 - If it\'s worrying you, you should __speak__ your mind. >> Correct!Q7 - There\'s a serious problem- I think we should _talk_. >> Correct!Q8 - We _Either_ things over and everything\'s OK between us now. >> talked Q9 - It\'s just _talk_- they\'ll never actually do it. >> Correct!Q10 - She _speaks_ in her sleep. >> talks

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