sorry. lei.~
학생이 쓴 원문
Good afternoon lei.~ i just arrived my office. i went out to have a lunch. Suddenly, my boss suggested to have a lunch outside. we had a iced noodles.
i noticed your call, but i was not able to pick up. i am sorry.
isn't it hot today? wow. i usually don't go out during working time. So i didin't know the exact temperature. wow. it is a summer!.
i heard that it's going to start the rainy season from tomorrow in Korea. i don't like the season. it makes me uncomfortable. ㅠ ㅠ
and today is the day! we have a game with Argentina at 8:30 pm.
i'm going to cheering the game at public stadium with my friend. many people will be gather at the stadium. i brought my red T-shirt and horn which are symbol of RED devils.
i am so exciting.~
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
Yeah I heard that rainy season in Korea officially starts tomorrow so don't forget to bring your umbrella just in case. ^^ About the Red Devils game tonight, all of my students, girl or boy are so excited about the game. They told me that a lot of people are wearing red shirts today. I hope Korean team wins the competition. GO RED DEVILS!!! Anyways I hope that you will have time for our lesson tomorrow. I miss you!!
Lei :-)
i just arrived my office.
>>I just arrived at my office
i went out to have a lunch.
>>correct
>>I went out for lunch (>>better)
Suddenly, my boss suggested to have a lunch outside.
>>unexpectedly, my boss suggested that we should have lunch outside the company.
we had iced noodles.
>>correct
i noticed your call, but i was not able to pick up.
i noticed your call, but i was not able to pick up.
>>I noticed your call but I was not able to answer it.
i am sorry.
>>correct
isn't it hot today?
>>correct
wow. i usually don't go out during work time.
>>correct
So i didn't know the exact temperature.
>>correct
wow. it is a summer!.
>>wow, it really summer now!
i heard that it's going to start the rainy season from tomorrow in Korea.
i heard that it's going to start the rainy season from tomorrow in Korea.
>>I heard that rainy season here in Korea is going to start tomorrow
i don't like the season.
>>correct
it makes me uncomfortable. ㅠ ㅠ
>>correct
and today is the day!
and today is the day!
>>correct
we have a game with Argentina at 8:30 pm.
>>correct!!
i'm going to cheer for the game at a public stadium with my friend.
i'm going to cheer for the game at a public stadium with my friend.
>>correct
many people will be gather at the stadium.
>>many people will be gathering in the stadium.
i brought my red T-shirt and horn which are the symbols of the RED devils.
>>correct
i am so exciting.~
i am so exciting.~
>>I am so excited.
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