Sorry & Thanks to you

2020-04-03 · 첨삭 강사 Fiona

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Dear [Name], First of all, Sorry for the status that I could\'t fully concentrated on the call this morning. It was due to the long stairs in our office which I didn\'t expected such a hard than yesterdays. And also I do recognized, it is no more possible to me to have a phone call while I climb the stairs, and sorry for my old body too. However thank for the feedback & giving me a new word \" peculiar\" . I will try to remember it but I am also concern that I often to loose more than two words if I try to memory one new English work. Sorry for my old brain too. Enjoy your weekend and Stay safe! BR CK

강사 첨삭

Good morning Mr. [Name]! 
No problem, I know that you have to hurry to reach work today. 
Don\'t be sorry, everyone will go through that process - THE AGING PROCESS - hahaha. 
Have a nice day! 

Dear [Name],

First of all, Sorry for the status that I could\'t fully concentrated on the call this morning.
>>First of all, I\'m sorry about my lack of concentration on the call this morning.
It was due to the long stairs in our office which I didn\'t expected such a hard than yesterdays.
>>It was because of the long stairs in our office that I didn\'t know it would be so hard than yesterday.
And also I do recognized, it is no more possible to me to have a phone call while I climb the stairs, and sorry for my old body too.
>>And what I realized was that it was impossible to make any more calls while climbing the stairs, and that my old body is sorry, too.
However thank for the feedback & giving me a new word \" peculiar\" .
>>But thanks for the feedback and for giving me a new word \"peculiar\".
I will try to remember it but I am also concern that I often to loose more than two words if I try to memory one new English work.
>>I will try to remember it. But what worries me is, if I try to remember words, I\'m actually forgetting them.
Sorry for my old brain too.
>>I feel sorry to my \"old brain\" too.
Enjoy your weekend and Stay safe!
>>Enjoy your weekend and stay safe!

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