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2017-10-20 · 첨삭 강사 Eunice

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Hi. sorry to disturb your work. but can you drop by after your work is completed? I have some problem. i am ok. I have a time now. what kind of problem do you have? As you know, our last project, Analyzing noise level for a apartment have a problem. Now we are producing that product 100 EA per day. It is big hit product in our company. By the way, the functionality of it have a problem. We make it let a person living in a apartment to get a noise level which is made by a person living upstairs themself. As measuring specific noise level, They noise maker and a victim may solve this problem easily. But the problme is that that equipment will stick on the wall of ceiling to get a noise from upstairs directly. but Sometimes It used to drop off from ceiling. I think the adhesive strength is lower than we expect. we may change that adhesive tape to improved things. Do you have a good idea to solve this one? Ok I got it. You just want to provide

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!

In this ever busy world, when you finally make it to the weekend it feels like you have fought a battle. Sometimes it seems hard to do anything but lie on the couch or sleep all day! But for some of us the weekends still mean valuable, productive time. Plan out blocks of time. Of course, work in some down time to relax, but if you want to get the most out of your weekends, scheduling Saturday and Sunday the way you schedule your weekdays will help. :)

See you on Monday^^

~T. Eunice


Hi. sorry to disturb your work. but can you drop by after your work is completed? I have some problem.
>> Hi, sorry for disturbing you but can you drop by after  you have completed
your work? I have some problems.
i am ok. I have a time now. what kind of problem do you have?
>> It\'s fine
I have time now. What kind of problem do you have?
As you know, our last project, Analyzing noise level for a apartment have a problem.

>> As you know, our last project was analyzing the noise level of an apartment has a problem. 
 Now we are producing that product 100 EA per day.

>>  Now, we are producing that product for about 100 EA per day. 

It is big hit product in our company.
>>
It is a big hit product in our company.
By the way, the functionality of it have a problem.

>> By the way, the function of it has a problem.
 We make it let a person living in a apartment to get a noise level which is made by a person living upstairs themself.

>>  We made it to lessen the noise level on the first floor of an apartment which comes from the people living upstairs. 

As measuring specific noise level, They noise maker and a victim may solve this problem easily.
>> When measuring the specific noise level, by the use of EA 100 they will definitely solve the problem easily.
But the problme is that that equipment will stick on the wall of ceiling to get a noise from upstairs directly. but Sometimes It used to drop off from ceiling.

>> But the problem is that the equipment will stick on the wall or  on the ceiling to get noise directly from upstairs but sometimes it is dropping off from the ceiling.
 I think the adhesive strength is lower than we expect. we may change that adhesive tape to improved things.

>>  I think the adhesive strength is lower than we expected, we can change that adhesive tape to improved things.
 Do you have a good idea to solve this one?

>> Do you have any idea on how to solve this problem?
 Ok I got it.
You just want to provide

>> I got it. You just want to provide a solution for this problem.

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