sorry, too late.

2010-08-09 · 첨삭 강사 Verna

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I was going to the beach. but it was not happend Instead of going to the beach, i will tell you about English club in Po-hang. It is held every Friday. so, I can meet many people who are interested in English so much. and Foreiners are included as well. We do the discussion gathering each table of eight people. But I feel very shamed. That's why I can't speak English very well. Many people are older than me. I'm very young more than them. I make sure to be active. Why can't i be active when I meet the English? How can I improve my english ability? Frankly, from now on, I think i'm very zealous. While seeing the people of advanced english, i can't understand How could they to that? Verna... I'm very sad..

강사 첨삭

Hi there Tracy. My most important piece of advice is: "Do something (anything). If you don't do anything, you won't get anywhere. Make it your hobby, not a chore, but above all have fun!"Don't be in too much of a hurry. You're setting off on a long journey and there'll be delays and frustrations along the way. Sometimes you'll be in the fast lane and other times you'll be stuck in traffic, but there will also be lots of interesting things and interesting people along the way. Take your time to really enjoy the experience. Don't be afraid to commit mistakes. You can do it!love, Verna I was going to the beach. but it was not happend >>I was supposed to go to the beach but it didn't happen. Instead of going to the beach, i will tell you about English club in Po-hang. >>CorrectIt is held every Friday. so, I can meet many people who are interested in English so much.and Foreiners are included as well. >>It is held every Friday. So, I can meet many people who are interested  so much in English.and foreigners are included as well.We do the discussion gathering each table of eight people. >> We do the  discussion comprising of eight people in each table.But I feel very shamed. That's why I can't speak English very well. >>Unfortunately, I feel very ashamed. That's why I can't speak English very well.  Many people are older than me. I'm very young more than them. >>Many people are older than me. I'm younger  than them.I make sure to be active. Why can't i be active when I meet the English? >>I try to be active but why can't i be active when I meet the English language?How can I improve my english ability? >> CorrectFrankly, from now on, I think i'm very zealous. >>Frankly, from now on, I think I need to be very zealous.While seeing the people of advanced english, i can't understand How could they to that? >>While seeing  people who are advanced in english, Ican't understand how could they to that?Verna... I'm very sad.. >>Correct

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