South Korea is about to approve vaccinating children ages 5-11. What is your opinion about this?

2022-03-03 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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Oh, It\'s serious question. I think It will be a risk to the children. It should need to the accurate information about vaccine. And the vaccines can\'t prevent 100%. We need to wait a little longer.

강사 첨삭

Hi Elic!

Vaccination is very important regardless of the age. But still, we need to be very mindful of the side effects so we have to consult a doctore first. :)

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Oh, It\'s serious question.

>>Oh, it\'s a serious question.

I think It will be a risk to the children.

>> I think it will be a risk to the children.

It should need to the accurate information about vaccine.

>> The information about the vaccine needs to be more accurate.

And the vaccines can\'t prevent 100%.

>> And the vaccines can\'t prevent the virus a 100%.

We need to wait a little longer.

>> CORRECT

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