Spam mail is an infectious disease.

2014-08-06 · 첨삭 강사 Debby

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The most characteristic feature of the spam mail is contagiousness. Once one open the mail, then the computer breaks down and the sender steal the personal information. For example, 3 years ago, I opened the mail whose caption is "Long time no see", and my computer started to download some files and broke down. To decrease the victims like me, spam mail should be outlawed.

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Hi there [이름]^^ Thank you so much for sending your response!^^ It is truly bothering to receive spam mail! I was also a victim like you. I had to chang my email address for 3 times! haha. It\'s frustrating! It\'s useless sometimes and just takes the space of our emails. What do you do with your spam mail? It\'s inconvinient right? So, like you I also agree that it must be controlled for the sake of the privacy of people.^^ Take care!^^ t. Debby^^ Here are my corrections for you today: The most characteristic feature of the spam mail is contagiousness. >> The most evident feature of the spam mail is it\'s contagiousness. Once one open the mail, then the computer breaks down and the sender steal the personal information. >>  Once one person opens the mail, the computer breaks down and the sender steals the personal information.  For example, 3 years ago, I opened the mail whose caption is \"Long time no see\", and my computer started to download some files and broke down. >> CORRECT OR> I had an experience 3 years back when I opened and downloaded a mail captioned \"Long time no see\" that had caused my computer to break down. To decrease the victims like me, spam mail should be outlawed. >> CORRECT OR> To lesses the victims like me, spam mail should be controlled by the Government.

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