Spanish and language part 2

2020-06-23 · 첨삭 강사 Sharon

학생이 쓴 원문

Spanish is the language have a big foot as much as English and Chinese and I thought It could be easy for me who can speak English somewhat to learn Spanish because the structure of sentence is similar with English the guide that I meet on trip in Europe told me that it is easy to speak other European languages if I speak Spanish first. Since It remained in my memory, Spanish was felt attractive to me who wants to speak more than 5languages I chose private tutoring instead of academies or online lectures because I wanted to study only for my satisfaction breaking away from the limitations like exams and deadlines that I had been thinking uncomfortable until my enrollment In the past, I was confused because to like to study felt weird because of the atmosphere that society created which saying ‘Study is what you don’t want to do’ and I thought that I should push learning language through because it is an investment for the future

강사 첨삭

Hi Ju!
I think we have a lot to discuss later on.
Please be ready with your questions.
I look forward to our discussion.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
Spanish is the language have a big foot as much as English and Chinese and I thought It could be easy for me who can speak English somewhat to learn Spanish because the structure of sentence is similar with English
>> Spanish is the language that has as much influence as English and Chinese and I thought it could be easy for me who can speak English somewhat to learn Spanish because the structure of sentences is similar to English.
the guide that I meet on trip in Europe told me that it is easy to speak other European languages if I speak Spanish first. 
>> The guide that I met on my trip to Europe told me that it would be easy to speak other European languages if I speak Spanish first. 
Since It remained in my memory, Spanish was felt attractive to me who wants to speak more than 5languages
>> Since it remained in my memory, I felt that Spanish was very attractive for someone who wants to speak more than 5 languages.
I chose private tutoring instead of academies or online lectures because I wanted to study only for my satisfaction breaking away from the limitations like exams and deadlines that I had been thinking uncomfortable until my enrollment
>> I chose private tutoring instead of academies or online lectures because I wanted to study only for myself, breaking away from the limitations like exams and deadlines that I had been thinking about and which had made me feel uncomfortable until my enrollment.
In the past, I was confused because to like to study felt weird because of the atmosphere that society created which saying ‘Study is what you don’t want to do’
>> In the past, I was confused because wanting to study felt weird because of the atmosphere that society created which implied, ‘Studying is what you don’t want to do.’
and I thought that I should push learning language through because it is an investment for the future
>> I thought that I should push through with learning languages because it is an investment for the future.

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