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I prefer to drive a private car to go to work and to go home, because public transport is always crowed with people.

>>I prefer to driving a private car going to work to riding a public transportation because it is more convenient.

Moreover it is a kind of private space so, I can do what I want to like singing or eating.

>>Moreover, I feel more comfortable. (Do not include singing and eating as you may meet an accident while doing them.)

However, sometimes I travel by bus like when going to Kangnam which is the most busiest area in Seoul.

>>However, I still sometimes ride a bus going to Gangnam, which is the busiest city area in Seoul.

It\'s more cheaper and convenient in this case.
>>It\'s cheaper and more convenient.
I use public transport once a month.
>>I still use public transportation once a month.
I think people in my country usually use public transport to go to work because of traffic.

>>I think Koreans usually use public transportations when they go to work because they don\'t want to get stuck in a traffic jam with their private cars.

Most people don\'t like driving at rush hour.

>>Also, most Koreans don\'t like driving in rush hours.

Also a transport system in Korea is well organized to use. 
>>The transportation system in South Korea is more developed.
I recommend visitors to use a bus in order to travel around my hometown as it\'s more punctual and cheaper than other transport. 
>>I would recommend visitors to use a bus to travel around my hometown as it\'s faster and cheaper than other public transportations.  
In my opinion, people won\'t drive cars more in the future because, car trends tend to have an autonomous driving system in the car.

>>In my opinion, people won\'t drive cars more in the future because car system trends tend to be more innovative.

It makes people to don\'t need to drive.

>>It makes people not to drive.