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~Elica~

My favorite teacher was the physical education teacher when I was a middle school student. 

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Physical education was my favorite class and I enjoyed to talk to him because he was so funny and always made sense our minds. 

>> Physical education was my favorite class and I enjoyed talking to him because he was so funny and always made sense in our min

When I was 20years old, I visited the middle school, but I couldn\'t meet him because he was transferred to other school.

>>When I was 20years old, I visited the middle school, but I couldn\'t meet him because he was transferred to another school.

 

Yes, I do. 

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Actually, I don\'t think that I’m gifted to teaching, but I hope I’m going to teach Korean and Korean cultures to foreigners when I live in other countries. 

>>Yes, I do. Actually, I don\'t think that I’m gifted in teaching, but I hope I’m going to teach Korean and Korean cultures to foreigners when I live in other countries. 

Moreover, if I come back to Korea after the graduation of a college, I’m going to try to teach English to Korean students because I hope they learn English more easily and more naturally.

>>Moreover, if I come back to Korea after graduation from college, I’m going to try to teach English to Korean students because I hope they learn English easier and more naturally.

 

It’s not a lot, but I love to collect glasses. 

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I have five glasses and want to buy more but I subdue the desire for glasses due to money. 

>>I have five pairs of glasses and want to buy more but I subdued the desire for glasses due to money.

These days, glasses are not only for vision correction but also they are for fashion, so I have various types of glasses for my image.

>>These days, glasses are not only for vision correction but also for fashion, so I have various types of glasses for my image. 

 

I prefer listen to live music, but it’s actually not easy because an admission fee is expensive and it takes quite long time to get to concert hall, so I enjoy watching singers’ live music videos instead of going to concert.

>>I prefer to listen to live music, but it’s actually not easy because the admission fee is expensive and it takes a quite long time to get to the concert halls, so I enjoy watching singers’ live music videos instead of going to the concerts.

 

I learned to play a guitar by my friend. 

>>I learned to play the guitar with my friend. 

the title of the song was 모든날, 모든순간, which means “every day, every moment”. 

>>The title of the song was 모든날, 모든순간, which means “every day, every moment”. 

When I learned a guitar for the first time, it was a challenge because it was more difficult to control my fingers than I thought. 

>>When I learned to play the guitar for the first time, it was a challenge because it was more difficult to control my fingers than I thought. 

However, I finally mastered the song and realized at that time “Enjoyment is the best training”.

>>However, I finally mastered the song and realized at that time that “Enjoyment is the best training”.

 

There is a good chance that students can discover their musical talents at the early age and become the best players in the world.

>>There is a good chance that students can discover their musical talents at an early age and become the best players in the world.

 

I think it is difficult to study and practice a musical instrument without a teacher. 

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I believe it takes more time to master it due to more trials and errors. 

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studying alone is likely going to give it up than learning a teacher.

>>Learning alone can more likely make you give it up than learning with a teacher.