Special Christmas.

2012-12-27 · 첨삭 강사 Alice

학생이 쓴 원문

Hi there, I'm [이름]. As i said before, two days ago, I enjoyed Christmas party with forigner friends who are from Malaysia. I happended to meet them at my work place at first and I did my serive for them to the utmost whenever they visited to my office to borrow thier ski-equipments. Maybe our kindness and smile made them feel comfortable and want to talk with us more. Although they could not speak Korean, we could break the ice whenever we met through special bodylanguage such as eye's move, smile and among many reasons the most decisive being my English skill that was clumsy but crucial sometimes. Anyhow, my trivial wish came true. That was my dream as well as my co-workers's one. Enjoying Happy Chirstmas Party with not-male friends. (HE! HE!). Inspite the event was not linked my love, I think it is enough and I'm satisfied with the event. Of course, I am bound to make pretty girl friend next time and have more enjoyable party. He He.

강사 첨삭

 Hello there! ^^, How are you today? I\'m done checking your homework and you did great. I honestly wish that someday you\'d meet the girl for you. ^^ I wrote down my corrections and please do try to look at them. Take care and talk to you in class! :) T. Alice Hi there, I\'m [이름]. >>Correct! As i said before, two days ago, I enjoyed Christmas party with forigner friends who are from Malaysia. >>As I said two days ago, I enjoyed the Christmas party with my foreigner friends who are from Malaysia.  I happended to meet them at my work place at first and I did my serive for them to the utmost whenever they visited to my office to borrow thier ski-equipments. >> I happened to meet them at my work place at first and I served them to the utmost of my ability whenever they visited my office to borrow their ski equipment. Maybe our kindness and smile made them feel comfortable and want to talk with us more. >>Correct! Although they could not speak Korean, we could break the ice whenever we met through special bodylanguage such as eye\'s move, smile and among many reasons the most decisive being my English skill that was clumsy but crucial sometimes. >>Although they could not speak Korean, we could break the ice whenever we met through a special body language such as eye movement, smile and among  the most decisive, my English skill that was clumsy but crucial sometimes. Anyhow, my trivial wish came true. >>Correct!  That was my dream as well as my co-workers\'s one. >> That was my dream as well as my co-workers\' one.  Enjoying Happy Chirstmas Party with not-male friends. >>Enjoying a happy Christmas party with female friends. (HE! HE!). Inspite the event was not linked my love, I think it is enough and I\'m satisfied with the event. >>(HE! HE!). Inspite the event, there was nothing romantic that happened. I think it is enough and I\'m satisfied with the event. >> OR: (HE! HE!). Inspite of the event, no one was romantically linked. I think it is enough and I\'m satisfied with the event. Of course, I am bound to make pretty girl friend next time and have more enjoyable party. He He. >>Of course, I am bound to make a pretty girlfriend next time and have a more enjoyable party. He He.

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