Special days

As you know, we have just one month in this year. When this year started, I had a lot of things that I want to achieve. Some part of my resolutions I made it, but somethings are still remained. One of the remainder is English. When this year started, I would like to take a better IELTS score than last year. But After test I notice that I need to study more than now to achieve my aiming to score. I used to celebrate my birthday to give thanks my parent. Especially When my birthday is coming up, I give my mother call and say like this "Thank you mother, So many years ago, For me you went through birth pangs. and because of that pain, I can be living now. Thanks mother" and we get together to eat special dinner. Actually my wife and I don't care too much about a wedding anniversary. The perfect anniversary is not expensive gift such as ring, wallet, bag I thing warm word from family is the best gift for my birthday

A great Monday morning to you Mr. [Name]! 

I want to congratulate you one more time for passing the certification with regards to your job. 

Congratulations! You really did a good job! 

Anyway, here are my corrections with your composition. 

See you again tomorrow! 

Take good care of yourself. 

I know you\'ll have a great day today. 
Continue the positivity and energy! 

Smile smile!! 

Always, 
Kathrine ^^

As you know, we have just one month in this year.

>> As you know, we have just one month left this year.

When this year started, I had a lot of things that I want to achieve.

>>  correct! 

Some part of my resolutions I made it, but somethings are still remained.

>> I made already some parts of my resolution, but there are still some things remaining. 

One of the remainder is English.

>> One of remaining things is English. 

When this year started, I would like to take a better IELTS score than last year.

>> correct! 

But After test I notice that I need to study more than now to achieve my aiming to score.

>> But after the test, I noticed that I need to study more than now to achieve the score I am aiming. 

I used to celebrate my birthday to give thanks my parent.

>> I used to celebrate my birthday to give thanks to my parents. 

 Especially When my birthday is coming up, I give my mother call and say like this

>> Especially when my birthday is coming, I would give a call to my mother and say like this. 

\"Thank you mother, So many years ago, For me you went through birth pangs.

>> \"Thank you mother because many years ago, you went through birth pangs because of me. 

 and because of that pain, I can be living now. Thanks mother\"

>> And because of that pain, I am living now, so thank you Mother.\"
and we get together to eat special dinner.
>>  And then we get together and eat special dinner. 

Actually my wife and I don\'t care too much about a wedding anniversary.

>> Actually, my wife and I don\'t care too much about our wedding anniversary. 

The perfect anniversary is not expensive gift such as ring, wallet, bag

>>  The perfect gift for the anniversary is not an expensive gift such as ring, wallet and bag. 

I thing warm word from family is the best gift for my birthday

>> A warm word from the family is the best gift for my birthday.