Special holiday:)

2021-12-31 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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Christmas is special holiday. I think carol song it makes atmosphere to more big. Christmas equal Mariah Carey All I wants to christmas with you song. And bell sounds every place turn on the pretty lights. I don\'t know about other Korean opinion. But I think christmas is special holiday :)

강사 첨삭

Hi Ann:)

For Filipinos, Christmas is the most important holiday ever. It is a very joyful occasion. That song is also played everywhere here. Hahaha!

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Christmas is special holiday.

>> Christmas is a special day.

I think carol song it makes atmosphere to more big.

>> I think carol songs make the atmosphere better.

Christmas equal Mariah Carey All I wants to christmas with you song.

>> Christmas means, \"All I want for Christmas is you\" song by Mariah Carey

And bell sounds every place turn on the pretty lights.

>> There will be bell sounds all over the place and pretty lights as well.

I don\'t know about other Korean opinion.
>> I don\'t know if other Koreans have the same opinion but I think that Christmas is a special holiday.

But I think christmas is special holiday :)

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