Special Plans
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
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~T.Chloe~
The special plans for my summer vacation is to achieve the average score over 80% of the formative test in the Teacher Institution.
>>My special plan for summer vacation is to achieve the average score of more than 80% of the formative test in the Teacher Institution.
In order to attain those scores, I will study for 16 hours a day in the library.
>>In order to attain that score, I will study for 16 hours a day in the library.
Moreover, because there is not enough time, I will strategically learn the concepts of all subjects such as syntax, semantic, school grammar and so on.
>>Moreover, because there is not enough time, I will just strategically learn the concepts of the subject such as syntax, semantic, school grammar and so on.
To be specipic, first, I will percieve the theories comprehansibley, and then collect what I understand, and study more deeply with solving many advanced questions.
>>To be specific, first, I will perceive the theories comprehensively, and then collect what I understood, and study more deeply by solving many advanced questions.
Through the procedures, there will be great news I will be in top ten.
>>Through these procedures, there will be great a news. I will be in the top ten.
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