special restaurant

2021-09-07 · 첨삭 강사 Fiona

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I haver never been there, but there was a very popular and revolution before 7year ago. that restaurant concept is darkness. All light is turn off when customer in the restaurant to going out even thought customers eating something.there are careful to sound or feeling and touched on finger. So, there are give to tension. Some couple or being start love couple prefer to there because they can focus more on each othere

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! 
I guess you wanted to go there with Mr. [Name]? - hahaha. 
I don\'t actually understand the concept, but it\'s interesting. 

I haver never been there, but there was a very popular and revolution before 7year ago.
>>> I\'ve never been there, but there was a huge popularity and revolution seven years ago.
that restaurant concept is darkness.
>>> The concept of the restaurant is darkness.
All light is turn off when customer in the restaurant to going out even thought customers eating something.there are careful to sound or feeling and touched on finger.
>>> The lights go out when customers at the restaurant make sounds, feel, or touch their fingers.
So, there are give to tension.
>>> The tension is intense. 
Some couple or being start love couple prefer to there because they can focus more on each othere
>>> Some couples prefer to go there because they can focus more on each other.

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