Special Soldier
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
Well, I guess it\'s really fun to play this game from the way you told stories about this.
It excites me to play it too. ^^
Anyway, I\'ll find to play this weekend to experience what you\'re experiencing.
By the way, do not forget about studying the book. ^^
_Teacher Dianne ^_^
Special Soldier game is really exciting.
>> The game Special Soldier is really exciting.
I am good at headshot.And I killed for 100people.
>> I am good at headshot and I already killed 100 people in this game.
And I killed for 11people using my gun for 3 minutes.
>> I also killed 11 people using my gun in just 3 minutes.
Doing Special Soldier I can\'t know what time it is.
>> I\'m not aware of the time or what time it is when I\'m playing Special Soldier.
My gun and sword is max level and it can kill and get good prize.
>> My gun and sword are at the maximum level and they could kill and get a good prize.
I am good at the place that name is StairWay,Bunker,Crossway,Warehouse.But I really weak Horror,Alley,Station.
>> I am good in playing at these places named Stair Way, Bunker, Crossway, Warehouse, but I\'m really weak in Horror and Alley station.
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