Speciality of my region
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Hi sir,
Wow! so you live near a port. That must be interesting. I love seafood. Maybe, if given a chance I would love to live in a place like yours.
Take care!
~T. Lynn
I live in Ahyeondong, Mapo-gu(province) in Seoul.
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Mapo was strategically important location for traffic and big port of Han-river.
>>Mapo is strategically important location for traffic and the big port of Han River.
Many products which have delivered in the han-river have shared at Mapo.
>> Many products which are delivered at the Han River is shared at Mapo.
Po in Korean language means a port and harbor.
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According to it, Mapo was strategically important location for traffic and many shares through the Mapo delivered in each gegion.
>>According to (who?), Mapo was strategically important location for traffic and is used to deliver products in other regions.
Since the Chosun Dynasty, many people lived in Mapo.
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There were also many famous restaurant.
>>There are also many famous restaurants here.
The many famous reataurant are the Kimchijjigae, Alaska pollack stews, cold noodles, and so on.
>>The restaurants serve Kimchichigae, Alaska pollack stew, cold noodles, and so on.
Mapo is good at catching the City Hall and accessible to the airport.
>> Mapo is near the city hall and is very accessible from the airport.
Mapo in seoul is the most hot place.
>>Mapo in Seoul is the hottest place.
Mapo apartment prices are increasingly going up.
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Especially My apartment complex is equipped with a sauna, swimming pool, gitness center, and golf indoor.
>> Especially my apartment complex which is equipped with a sauna, swimming pool, fitness center, and indoor golf.
Many apartment near my house is building now.
>> There are many apartments being built near my house now.
The only weakness is that air is not very good.
>>The only disadvantage is that the air is not very good here.
Anyway, would you like to live in here?
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