Spend time with similar people.
학생이 쓴 원문
The level of education sometimes matters when it comes to human interaction since it is likely that people with similar educational levels feel freer to discuss about certain issues or become more understanding with each other. However, it shouldn\'t be a barrier among individuals who have different educational backgrounds to maintain relationships, which could lead to education as a means of discrimination. As for my personal preference, I like spending time with friends who have similar socio-economic conditions which include and reflect one\'s level of education. This doesn\'t mean that I don\'t prefer to have time together with relatively undereducated people, but the thing is there are not many chances for me to come across different types of individuals. Even though I am fully aware that encountering differences and being challenged by someone else are necessary for me to be more mature, it is not always easy to put a little time and effort in order to get out of my comfort zone.
강사 첨삭
Hi Drexel! Thank you for spending a little of your time with your homework. I appreciate the effort. ^ ^
I acknowledge the fact that you are aware that a person can grow more and can become more successful when he\'s exposed to people from different walks of life. Maybe it\'s also nice to push yourself to go to unfamiliar places and do what you don\'t normally do! ^ ^
-Teacher Jedah
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However, it shouldn\'t be a barrier among individuals who have different educational backgrounds to maintain relationships, which could lead to education as a means of discrimination.
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As for my personal preference, I like spending time with friends who have similar socio-economic conditions which include and reflect one\'s level of education.
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This doesn\'t mean that I don\'t prefer to have time together with relatively undereducated people, but the thing is there are not many chances for me to come across different types of individuals.
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Even though I am fully aware that encountering differences and being challenged by someone else are necessary for me to be more mature, it is not always easy to put a little time and effort in order to get out of my comfort zone.
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