Spending money on space research
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It may be important for countries to spend money on space research. But I think we need to focus more on cleaning and stabilizing the Earth. If we look outside and find a new planet, we\'ll end up in the same fate as Earth.
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It may be important for countries to spend money on space research.
>> CORRECT
But I think we need to focus more on cleaning and stabilizing the Earth.
>> However, I think we need to focus more on cleaning and stabilizing the Earth.
If we look outside and find a new planet, we\'ll end up in the same fate as Earth.
>> CORRECT
But I think we need to focus more on cleaning and stabilizing the Earth.
>> However, I think we need to focus more on cleaning and stabilizing the Earth.
If we look outside and find a new planet, we\'ll end up in the same fate as Earth.
>> If we look for a new planet, we will end up facing the same fate as Earth.
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