Spending time alone

2025-04-28 · 첨삭 강사 Sharon

학생이 쓴 원문

I usually spend time sleeping, running, and studying. I don\'t like study much, but I have to do that. Therefore, I don\'t have much time in week days, I often studt at weekend and when I have time alone. If I don\'t take a test and exercise, I will go to relaxed and quiet cafe to read book and watch Youtube.

강사 첨삭

Hi Jady!
Thanks for sharing today.
I look forward to more effort in the future.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I usually spend time sleeping, running, and studying.
>> I usually spend my time sleeping, running, and studying.
I don\'t like study much, but I have to do that.
>> I don\'t like studying much, but I have to do it.
Therefore, I don\'t have much time in week days, I often studt at weekend and when I have time alone.
>> Therefore, I don\'t have much time on weekdays, so I often study on the weekends and when I have time alone.
If I don\'t take a test and exercise, I will go to relaxed and quiet cafe to read book and watch Youtube.
>> If I don\'t have a test or exercise to do, I will go to a relaxing and quiet café to read books and watch YouTube.


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