Spirit

A man who is working for railroad company went into a refrigerated freight and the door is locked by accident. He tried to go out, but it was in vain. No one outside could hear the man shouting and pounding the door because of solid and hard wall of the train. The last hope was someone coming to open the door to save him. If not, he shall be frozen to death. As time passed, he gave up all hope to live and fall in desperation. His body became to numb with cold and he awared that he will be dying soon. He began to write his body state on the wall. " I feel cold and my body is going to be frozen, and this may be my last time in my life." Some times later, someone opened the door of the freight and found the dead body. But, infact, amazingly the refrigerated freight has broken already. The air was enough to breathe and the tempature was only cool not too cold to die. Man is supposed to do what he is thinking

Dear [Name]. [이름],   A terrific Tuesday to you! ^.^   First of all, thank you for sharing something again using your composition. ^^ Anyway, I think the power of mind is really strong. However, the man who works for a railroad company used that power negatively. I believe that impossible things can be achieved when you think that those things are possible to happen.   Anyhow, that is all for now! ^^ Happy reading! ^^, See you later! ^^.   ... Teacher Paula ... ^.~     A man who is working for railroad company went into a refrigerated freight and the door is locked by accident. >> A man who is working for railroad company went into a refrigerated freight, and the door locked by accident. He tried to go out, but it was in vain. >> CORRECT! No one outside could hear the man shouting and pounding the door because of solid and hard wall of the train. >> No one outside could hear the man shouting and pounding the door because of the solid and hard wall of the train. The last hope was someone coming to open the door to save him. >> The last hope was for someone to come open the door to save him. >> OR: His last hope was for someone to come open the door to save him. If not, he shall be frozen to death. >> CORRECT! As time passed, he gave up all hope to live and fall in desperation. >> As time passed, he gave up all hopes to live and fall in desperation. His body became to numb with cold and he awared that he will be dying soon. >> His body became to numb with cold, and he was aware that he will be dying soon. He began to write his body state on the wall. >> He began to write his body\'s state on the wall. \" I feel cold and my body is going to be frozen, and this may be my last time in my life.\" >> \"I feel cold and my body is going to be frozen, and this may be the end of my life.\" Some times later, someone opened the door of the freight and found the dead body. >> Some time later, someone opened the door of the freight and found the dead body. >> BETTER: Some time later, someone opened the door of the freight and found his dead body. >> OR: Some time later, someone opened the door of the freight and found the man\'s dead body. But, infact, amazingly the refrigerated freight has broken already. >> But, infact, amazingly, the refrigerated freight was broken already. The air was enough to breathe and the tempature was only cool not too cold to die. >> The air was enough for a person to breathe, and the temperature was only cool and not too cold to make someone die. Man is supposed to do what he is thinking >> Man is supposed to do what he is thinking.