Spociness is taste, not pain

2022-06-22 · 첨삭 강사 Aki

학생이 쓴 원문

I can\'t understand this petition. It\'s not fuuny. Their judgements and arguments are largely wrong. Many Koreans enjoy spicy taste. It is made more spicy in chicken, noodles, soups etc. It is nor always spicy school lunches. This petition show their arrogant behavior and narrow minded.

강사 첨삭

Good day Ms. [이름]!
I wonder about that too. I know that it is natural for Koreans to eat spicy food. Is the information misleading then? 
However, I heard some young Koreans do not enjoy spicy and traditional  Korean food , I guess it\'s because of he influence of the West.
Thank you for reacting on this article. See you later.
Aki~
I can\'t understand this petition.
>>> CORRECT!
It\'s not funny.
>>> CORRECT!
Their judgements and arguments are largely wrong.
>>> CORRECT!
Many Koreans enjoy spicy taste. It is made more spicy in chicken, noodles, soups etc.
>>> CORRECT!
It is not always spicy school lunches.
>>> CORRECT! 
OR >>>  School do not always provide spicy lunches.
This petition show their arrogant behavior and narrow minded.
>>>  This petition shows their arrogant behavior and narrow-mindedness.

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