Sports doesn't not allowed to anticipate the result
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Sports doesn't not allowed to anticipate the result.
Of course, I want to see that yuna queen win the game.
and Yuna is the most anticipated athlete
but, there are lots of athletes who have wonderful ability too.
the time is not yet to anticipate the winner of the game.
Many analysists said that Yuna is the best player in the world.
Asada mao as rival of Yuna, get a highlights from the media, but mao get low socore in last performance.
there is new player who get many intersts from Russia.
I don't know her name, but she get a high score in last performance which is almost same grade with Yuna's.
Many people and media think that Russian player got more higher socore than they thought.
I agree with them.
she got home advantage.
anyway, I pray for her to win the game!
Good luck yuna!
강사 첨삭
Good evening [이름]!
Wow! You impressed me tonight with your homework!
You used new vocabularies and you really shared your ideas in a nice way.
I hope that you will always perform this way.
I do admire you for wanting your player to win. ^^
I am looking forward to hear good results of Kim Yuna\'s performance tomorrow.
Take a lot of rest tonight. See you tomorrow!
Teacher Nina
Sports doesn\'t not allowed to anticipate the result.
>> Did you mean: In sports, we can\'t anticipate the results.Of course, I want to see that yuna queen win the game.
>> Of course, I want to see that Yuna queen will win the game.
>> Better: I want to see that Yuna will win the game.and Yuna is the most anticipated athlete
>> And Yuna is the most anticipated athlete to win. but, there are lots of athletes who have wonderful ability too.
>> But there are lots of athletes who have a wonderful ability too.
>> OR: But there are lots of athletes who have special skills too.the time is not yet to anticipate the winner of the game.
>> It is not yet the time to anticipate who will be the winner of the game. Many analysists said that Yuna is the best player in the world.
>> Many analysts said that Yuna is the best player in the world. Asada mao as rival of Yuna, get a highlights from the media, but mao get low socore in last performance.
>> Asada Mao,rival of Yuna, got highlights from the media, but got a low score in the last performance.
there is new player who get many intersts from Russia.
>> Did you mean: There is a new player who gained a lot of fans from Russia.I don\'t know her name, but she get a high score in last performance which is almost same grade with Yuna\'s.
>> I don\'t know her name, but she got a higher score in the last performance which was almost the same as the grade of Yuna. >> OR: I don\'t know her name, but she got a higher score than Yuna.
Many people and media think that Russian player got more higher socore than they thought.
>> Did you mean: Many people and media think that the Russian player got a higher score than what they expected.I agree with them.
>> Correctshe got home advantage.
>> Did you mean: She has an advantage.
>> OR: She has an advantage because Russia is her homeland. anyway, I pray for her to win the game!
>> Anyway, I will pray for her to win the game.Good luck yuna!
>> Correct
>> Better: Good luck Yuna!
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