Sports Facilities
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To improve our city condition, I think sports facilities should be built, because many people in my city like sports, but there are not enough facilities. It will make my city very active.
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To improve our city condition, I think sports facilities should be built, because many people in my city like sports, but there are not enough facilities.
>> To improve our city\'s condition, I think sports facilities should be built because many people here like sports, but there are not enough facilities.
It will make my city very active.
>> CORRECT
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