Sports for women
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Korea is the strongest country in archery.
I heard since archery became a game of the olympic, our women national team has never missed a gold medal in a team match.
They won the 9th gold medal at the Tokyo olympic.
I think women is better then men for the archery because women are more delicate and can focus more.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]ny!
Women are better than men in lots of things.
We can talk about them in class.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
Korea is the strongest country in archery.
>> Korea is the strongest country in the archery event.
I heard since archery became a game of the olympic, our women national team has never missed a gold medal in a team match.
I heard since archery became a game of the olympic, our women national team has never missed a gold medal in a team match.
>> I heard since archery became a game in the Olympics, our women\'s national team has never missed a gold medal in a team match.
They won the 9th gold medal at the Tokyo olympic.
They won the 9th gold medal at the Tokyo olympic.
>> They won the 9th gold medal in the Tokyo Olympics.
I think women is better then men for the archery because women are more delicate and can focus more.
I think women is better then men for the archery because women are more delicate and can focus more.
>> I think women are better then men in archery because women are more precise and they can focus more.
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