Sports Homework (2)
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강사 첨삭
Hi there [이름]!
Thank you so much for showing me your new doll.
I love it! It is so cute.
I hope that you will have a great day tomorrow.
I can\'t wait to have a class with you and Ryan again.
Please go over the corrections I give you everyday.
See you and Take care.
Teacher Nina
I buy new dall yesterday.
>> I bought a new doll yesterday.
It\'s kakao friends - Ryan. and study and make a story with my new dall and practice some words and exit our class.
>> it is one of the Kakao friends, Ryan. We studied, made a story about my new, practiced some words and ended our class.
OK. Now, Answer the following questions.
>> correct
3. Do you have a sports bag?
I don\'t. But my dad has a sports bag.
>> correct
What are other answers to this question?
>> I don\'t have a sports bag but my dad has one.
4. Do you have everything you need in your bag?
Yes. It\'s pencil, eraser, notebook.
>> Yes, I have my pencil, eraser and notebook.
What are other answers to this question?
>> Yes, I have my school supplies in my book.
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