Sports reporter experience
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There was a job experience in Olympic mermorial museum.I learned the moving moment of olympic and what doest the sports reporter do.It ends at 12.Job experience is better than stay at school.I hope I can be a good sports reporter.
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Teacher Brian,
There was a job experience in Olympic mermorial museum.
>> There was a job fair experience in the Olympic memorial museum.
I learned the moving moment of olympic and what doest the sports reporter do.
>> I learned what reporters do and the moving ceremony of Olympics
It ends at 12.Job experience is better than stay at school.
>> The job fair experience ends at 12 in the afternoon and it is better rather than staying at school.
I hope I can be a good sports reporter.
>> I hope that I can be a good sports reporter in the future.
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