Spranined ankle.

2019-04-03 · 첨삭 강사 Glenda

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I sprained ankle during P.E. class. It was the last time to play Indiaca for practice. Indiaca is a ball looks like a big badminton ball. So,I was concentrate on the game. Today, I did miss many times but I spiked many times. While the ball is came to me I ran and jumped to hit the ball but suddenly one friend also ran to a ball and we fell down. I just sprayed a pass. It\'s a little painful when I walk.

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I sprained ankle during P.E. class.

>> I sprained my ankle during our P.E class.

It was the last time to play Indiaca for practice.

>> Correct

Indiaca is a ball looks like a big badminton ball. So,I was concentrate on the game.

>> Indiaca is a ball that looks like a big badminton ball. So, I was concentrated on the game.

Today, I did miss many times but I spiked many times.

>> Correct

While the ball is came to me I ran and jumped to hit the ball but suddenly one friend also ran to a ball and we fell down.

>> While the ball was coming at me I ran and jumped to hit the ball but suddenly one friend also ran for the ball and we fell down.

I just sprayed a pass. It\'s a little painful when I walk.

>> Correct

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