Spring

I think the best time to visit my city is in spring. The weather is warm and there are many flowers everywhere. People can walk outside comfortably and enjoy the beautiful scenery. There are also many festivals during this season, so it’s a fun time to visit.

Hi Jenny! This is such a bright and refreshing description of spring!  You did a great job organizing your ideas and expressing them clearly. I can really imagine the beautiful scenery in your city through your words. You have a lovely writing style, it’s simple, natural, and full of positive energy. I also like how you mentioned both the weather and the festivals; it shows great awareness of what makes spring special. You’re improving so well, and your writing feels more confident each time. Keep it up, Jenny, you’re really blooming like spring!

~Teacher Cathy

 

I think the best time to visit my city is in spring.

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OR>> I think the best time to visit my city is during spring.
The weather is warm and there are many flowers everywhere.

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OR>> The weather is warm, and flowers bloom everywhere.
People can walk outside comfortably and enjoy the beautiful scenery.

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OR>> People can take a walk comfortably and enjoy the lovely scenery.
There are also many festivals during this season, so it’s a fun time to visit.

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OR>> There are many festivals in this season, making it a fun and lively time to visit.