spring
학생이 쓴 원문
It is nearly getting warmer and it is nearly spring. I like spring because at May third because it is my birthday. For my birthday i want have a lego star wars.It is now getting warmer so I can play football and ride bycle. There will be beautiful flowers and I would like to see them. I can play with my friends so I am really happy. My winter vacation is now over and I hope that the spring will go fast and the summer vacation will be come fast.
강사 첨삭
Hi MIN!:)
Happy Thursday!
It\'s the year of the Fire Monkey!^_^
We\'ll, I\'m happy for you. You can now do the things you enjoy like playing football and riding your bike. There\'s only wet and dry season here in my country. By March or April, we\'ll experience hot weather(summer). I don\'t really like summer season or hot weather. I feel uneasy.^_^
Thank you for this composition. I\'ve made some modifications. I\'ll see you in class.
~T. Mayleen~
It is nearly getting warmer and it is nearly spring.
>> It is getting warmer and it is nearly spring.
I like spring because at May third because it is my birthday.
>> I like spring because my birthday is on May 3.
For my birthday i want have a lego star wars.
>> For my birthday, I want to have a lego star wars set.
It is now getting warmer so I can play football and ride bycle.
>> Since it is getting warmer, I can now play football and ride bicycles.
There will be beautiful flowers and I would like to see them.
>> Correct!
I can play with my friends so I am really happy.
>> Correct!
My winter vacation is now over and I hope that the spring will go fast and the summer vacation will be come fast.
>> My winter vacation is now over and I hope spring will come fast as well as summer vacation.
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