Spring has beatiful flowers, new sprouts.
학생이 쓴 원문
In Korea, it is said that spring is woman's season and autumn is man's season.
Because spring is gorgeous and autumn is gloomy.
Spring has beatiful flowers, new sprouts.
Autumn has colored leaves, fallen leaves.
Korea has four seasons. spring, summer, autumn, winter.
Now Korea, it is season that winter ends and spring starts.
Philippines has two season, wet season, dry season(summer).
Now Philippines, it is dry season.
Is it right?
강사 첨삭
Hi again!
Yes it is summer (dry season) here now. It is very hot and people are all planning to go on a vacation in beach resorts.
Maybe my family or my friends will plan for a vacation like that this summer. How about you, what is your plan this spring?
Spring has beatiful flowers, new sprouts.>> Spring has beautiful flowers, new sprouts.
Autumn has colored leaves, fallen leaves.>> Autumn has colored and fallen leaves.
Korea has four seasons. spring, summer, autumn, winter.>> Korea has four seasons; spring, summer, autumn, winter.
Now Korea, it is season that winter ends and spring starts.>> Now in Korea, winter is almost over and spring is starting.Now Philippines, it is dry season.>> Now in the Philippines, it is dry season.
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