spring semester!

Today is the first day of spring semester. I felt very excited. In the early morning, I prepared to go to college for about 1 hour. I wore the most gorgeous clothe in my closet and make up my face. Then, my mother said 'What are you doing? Do you go to school to show your fashion or study hard?' Of course, I go to my college to study my major, but it's very important to be looked nice because today is the first day of spring semester. Therefore, I wear some slight clothes in order to be looked nice although it was very cold today. I met my friends and it was very good to see them. We ate lunch together and talked about our class. Probably we'll take the same classes. In this semester, I'll study very hard and I want to take scholarship.

Hi [이름], I hope you had a great time today since it was your first day. Anyway, I have included here some corrections of your composition. These are very minimal corrections. See you tomorrow! -T. Faye   Today is the first day of spring semester. >> Correct.  I felt very excited. >> Correct.  In the early morning, I prepared to go to college for about 1 hour. >> Early this morning, I prepared to go to school an hour before the time. I wore the most gorgeous clothe in my closet and make up my face. >> I wore the most gorgeous clothes in my closet and I put make up on my face. Then, my mother said 'What are you doing? >> Then, my mother said “What are you doing?” Do you go to school to show your fashion or study hard?' >> “Do you go to school to show your fashion or study hard?” Of course, I go to my college to study my major, but it's very important to be looked nice because today is the first day of spring semester. >> “Of course, I go to my college to study my major, but it's very important to look nice because today is the first day of the spring semester.” Therefore, I wear some slight clothes in order to be looked nice although it was very cold today. >> Therefore, I wore some thin clothes in order to look nice although it was very cold today. I met my friends and it was very good to see them. >> Correct. We ate lunch together and talked about our class. >> Correct. Probably we'll take the same classes. >> Correct. In this semester, I'll study very hard and I want to take scholarship. >> This semester, I'll study very hard because I want to get a scholarship.