Sprinkling ash on the finished rice!!!
학생이 쓴 원문
I hate the situation of sprinkling ash on finished rice the most. You may not know what this mean. I\'ll explain with an example. This really happened. When I was in the 6th grade of elementary school, my teacher gave each group a set of dominoes about 20 minutes before lunch. The mission was to first have lunch in a group order of perfecting and destroying all dominoes. Now our group only needs to be built two more, but my friend destroyed ours. It was also a complete mess... I couldn\'t get angry because she was a close friend. I hate this situation the most.
P.S. The picture is character
강사 첨삭
Good evening Maria!
This situation is really frustrating and you may feel defeated right after the dominos have fallen. However, perhaps your classmate did not mean to ruin your class activity and in this case, you must learn to forgive and build the pieces again. Sometimes, things go wrong not because people want them to go bad. Bad things just happen when you are rushing.
Well, thanks for this excellent true story. Two thumbs up for you!
-T. Donna =)
>> Correct!
You may not know what this mean.
>> You may not know what this means.
I\'ll explain with an example.
>> Correct!
This really happened.
>> Correct!
When I was in the 6th grade of elementary school, my teacher gave each group a set of dominoes about 20 minutes before lunch.
>> Correct!
The mission was to first have lunch in a group order of perfecting and destroying all dominoes.
>> Correct!
Or: dominoes/ dominos
Now our group only needs to be built two more, but my friend destroyed ours. It was also a complete mess...
>> Correct!
I couldn\'t get angry because she was a close friend. I hate this situation the most.
>> Correct!
P.S. The picture is character
>> P.S. The picture is the character.
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