Standards of beauty.
학생이 쓴 원문
Because each person has different standards of beauty. Some people like light skin because it looks clean and innocent. On the other hand, some people like dark skin because they think it looks healthy and cool. As I said before, each person\'s standard of beauty is different, so they have different thoughts.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Sheila! ^^
Thank you for the composition.
See you in our next class! :)
~ Teacher Tricia
Because each person has different standards of beauty.
>>> CORRECT!
Some people like light skin because it looks clean and innocent.
>>> CORRECT!
On the other hand, some people like dark skin because they think it looks healthy and cool.
>>> CORRECT!
As I said before, each person\'s standard of beauty is different, so they have different thoughts.
>>> CORRECT!
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