Stars and Constellation

The meaning of constellation is a group of stars which has its own name. There are many constellation such as 'Scorpius' and 'Centaurus' in the night sky. The most famous constellation in the far east is the polar star which is the tale of Ursa Major. Meanwhile, we often read somebody's fortune by the star sign just for fun. According to this, I'm a feminine and emotionally unstable person because Cancer influenced me very much when I was born. Futhermore, I should be careful the man who come up to me today unless I will be dishearten. I think it is funny althoug it rarely come true.

Hi [이름]! Thank you for taking the time to do your homework! I hope you learned a lot from me today. I hope learning something about the stars interests you to learn more about them. We could talk more about stars tomorrow. T.Faye   Here are some of the corrections:   The meaning of constellation is a group of stars which has its own name. >>Correct! There are many constellation such as 'Scorpius' and 'Centaurus' in the night sky. >> There are many constellation such as 'Scorpius' and 'Centaurus' seen in  the sky at night. The most famous constellation in the far east is the polar star which is the tale of Ursa Major. >> The most famous constellation in the far east is the polar star which came from the Tale of Ursa Major.Meanwhile, we often read somebody's fortune by the star sign just for fun. >>Correct! According to this, I'm a feminine and emotionally unstable person because Cancer influenced me very much when I was born. >>According to this, I’m a Cancer and I am a feminine and is emotionally unstable. This influenced me when I was born. Futhermore, I should be careful the man who come up to me today unless I will be dishearten. >>Furthermore, I should be careful with the man who will come up to me today because he might break my heart. I think it is funny althoug it rarely come true. >>I think it is funny although, it rarely comes true.