Stars Homework

2018-10-30 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

학생이 쓴 원문

I study Junior Lower Intermediate - Part 5 (North star) and talk about solar system and practice some words and exit our class. OK. Now, Answer the following questions. 3. What do you see when you look at the night sky? I always see night sky after dinner. What are other answers to this question? 4. What is the brightest of all the stars? It's Venus. it's the second planet from the sun, and it's also hottest planet. What are other answers to this question?

강사 첨삭

Hello there [이름]!
Thank you so much for your time.
I am so thankful that you share a lot of things in our class.
You did a great job again tonight.

Please go over the corrections below.
See you and take care.

Teacher Nina

I study Junior Lower Intermediate - Part 5 (North star) and talk about solar system and practice some words and exit our class.
>> I studied Junior Lower Intermediate Part 5 (North Star) , talked about the Solar System, practiced some words and ended our class.
OK. Now, Answer the following questions.
>> CORRECT
3. What do you see when you look at the night sky?

I always see night sky after dinner.
>> I always see the night sky after dinner.

What are other answers to this question?
>> I always look at the night sky after dinner.

4. What is the brightest of all the stars?

It\'s Venus. it\'s the second planet from the sun, and it\'s
also hottest planet.
>> correct

What are other answers to this question?

>> The brightest star in the Sky is Sirius, also known as Dog Star.

>> OR: The brightest star is the Alpha Canis Majoris.

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