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학생이 쓴 원문
Above ID is my new ID
We can talk Tomorrow ^^ (and pleses tell me your skype ID)
After 7days my ordinary computer(also notebook but which had more high function so fast that help me when we talking) alive.
P.S.
What present ?? I don't like expensive goods or anything. because they so easy
to get if I have money
My opinion that more high quality present had fully one's true heart or felt a devotion.
If I receive that present I will remember you forever.
Even though we were lived in different country or time...
But I don't want to bother you.
Because I already know that you have pure and beautiful spirit.
강사 첨삭
Comment: Your P.S. should be a short note only. Well, I hope that she will give you a present and I know that it would be special… J
Above ID is my new ID>>That is my new ID.We can talk Tomorrow ^^ (and pleses tell me your skype ID)
>>Correct!
>>Spelling: pleses: PLEASEAfter 7days my ordinary computer(also notebook but which had more high function so fast that help me when we talking) alive. >>After 7 days my ordinary computer came back to life. (It is also a notebook that has more functions, and is fast. It is also what I am using to communicate with you.)P.S. What present ?? I don't like expensive goods or anything. >>Correct!because they so easy to get if I have money>>Because it is easy to buy them if I have money.My opinion that more high quality present had fully one's true heart or felt a devotion.>>In my opinion, presents with high quality is given by one’s true heart or devotion.If I receive that present I will remember you forever. >>If I will be able to receive that present, I will remember you forever.Even though we were lived in different country or time...>>Even though we live in different countries or time.But I don't want to bother you.>>Correct!Because I already know that you have pure and beautiful spirit.
>> Because I already know that you have a pure and beautiful spirit.
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