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2011-05-30 · 첨삭 강사 Faye

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What kind of news do you heard? I'm not problem. What about today? I'm really disappointed by myself when you are experience the difficult problem. I cannot help you anything. I'm so sorry. I thought if I give you a lot affection like friendly or something special feelings I'm so happy but like this situation I realized that I don't give you anything. I want to listen about your problem all. but sometimes I cannot join this Skype. then you disappointed to me. I really want to show you for sharing your emotion about problem. But we cannot doing now well long time . then you disappointed to me. I'd like to sing a song what you wanted. But I cannot doing now because we cannot know more about each other. we are lived in another country. then you disappointed to me.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름] [이름]! I think she is really disappointed but I hope you can fix your friendship. Because I know that you shared a lot of stories and experiences through skype and I hope that you will still continue to be friends. T.Faye Here are some of your corrections: What kind of news do you heard? >>What kind of news did you hear?I'm not problem. >>I don't have a problem. >>It is not a problem for me.What about today? >>Correct!I'm really disappointed by myself when you are experience the difficult problem. >>I really feel disappointed when you experience difficult problems. I cannot help you anything.>>I cannot help you with anything. I'm so sorry.>>Correct! I thought if I give you a lot affection like friendly or something special feelings I'm so happy but like this situation I realized that I don't give you anything.>>I thought that by being friendly and sharing special feelings with you will make me feel happy, but in this situation I realized that I am not giving you anything. I want to listen about your problem all. >>I want to listen to all of your problems. but sometimes I cannot join this Skype. >>But sometimes I cannot sign in to Skype. then you disappointed to me.>>Then you get disappointed. I really want to show you for sharing your emotion about problem. >>I really want to share the emotion you feel about the problem. But we cannot doing now well long time .   >>But we cannot do that for a long time.then you disappointed to me.>>Then you get disappointed. I'd like to sing a song what you wanted. >>I'd like to sing the song that you wanted me to sing. But I cannot doing now because we cannot know more about each other. >>But I cannot do that now.we are lived in another country. >>We live in different coutries. then you disappointed to me. >>You get disappointed with me.

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