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What kind of news do you heard?
I'm not problem.
What about today?
I'm really disappointed by myself when you are experience the difficult problem.
I cannot help you anything.
I'm so sorry.
I thought if I give you a lot affection like friendly or something special feelings I'm so happy
but like this situation I realized that I don't give you anything.
I want to listen about your problem all. but sometimes I cannot join this Skype. then you disappointed to me.
I really want to show you for sharing your emotion about problem. But we cannot doing now well long time .
then you disappointed to me.
I'd like to sing a song what you wanted. But I cannot doing now because we cannot know more about each other.
we are lived in another country. then you disappointed to me.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름] [이름]!
I think she is really disappointed but I hope you can fix your friendship. Because I know that you shared a lot of stories and experiences through skype and I hope that you will still continue to be friends.
T.Faye
Here are some of your corrections:
What kind of news do you heard?
>>What kind of news did you hear?I'm not problem.
>>I don't have a problem.
>>It is not a problem for me.What about today?
>>Correct!I'm really disappointed by myself when you are experience the difficult problem. >>I really feel disappointed when you experience difficult problems.
I cannot help you anything.>>I cannot help you with anything.
I'm so sorry.>>Correct!
I thought if I give you a lot affection like friendly or something special feelings I'm so happy but like this situation I realized that I don't give you anything.>>I thought that by being friendly and sharing special feelings with you will make me feel happy, but in this situation I realized that I am not giving you anything.
I want to listen about your problem all.
>>I want to listen to all of your problems.
but sometimes I cannot join this Skype.
>>But sometimes I cannot sign in to Skype.
then you disappointed to me.>>Then you get disappointed.
I really want to show you for sharing your emotion about problem.
>>I really want to share the emotion you feel about the problem.
But we cannot doing now well long time .
>>But we cannot do that for a long time.then you disappointed to me.>>Then you get disappointed.
I'd like to sing a song what you wanted.
>>I'd like to sing the song that you wanted me to sing.
But I cannot doing now because we cannot know more about each other.
>>But I cannot do that now.we are lived in another country.
>>We live in different coutries.
then you disappointed to me.
>>You get disappointed with me.
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