Starting school

2011-01-31 · 첨삭 강사 Connie

학생이 쓴 원문

Today, I start going to school. I submitted my works because it was homework. I asked to my friends... " How much work do you need to do?" Then my friends said " Writing diaries and the books they I had read" OH NO!! I HAD LOTS OF THING TO DO!! I THINK OUR SCHOOL HAS THE MOST HOMEWORK AMONG OTHER SCHOOLS!! Still not the most I submitted some workbooks and my guitar book I hope I can spend a great time in school! P.S. I'm the school broadcasting member so I broadcast school events and other things!! How great!

강사 첨삭

Hello Joey,

Wow, sounds like you will be very busy with work. The good news is you'll be able to spend time with your school friends again. Talk to you tomorrow.

-RJ
Today, I start going to school.

>>Today, I start school again.
I submitted my works because it was homework.

>>I submitted my homework.
I asked to my friends...

>>correct
" How much work do you need to do?"
>>correct

Then my friends said

>>correct
" Writing diaries and the books they I had read"
>>Writing diaries about the books they and I have read.

OH NO!! I HAD LOTS OF THING TO DO!! I THINK OUR SCHOOL HAS THE MOST HOMEWORK AMONG OTHER SCHOOLS!!

>>OH NO!! I HAD LOTS OF THINGS TO DO!! I THINK OUR SCHOOL HAS THE MOST HOMEWORK AMONG OTHER SCHOOLS!!

Still not the most

>>correct
I submitted some workbooks and my guitar book
>>correct
I hope I can spend a great time in school!

>>I hope I can have a great time at school!
P.S. I'm the school broadcasting member so I broadcast school events and other things!! How great!

>>correct

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