Starting school

Today, I start going to elementary school again! We had a short spring break before starting school Now I'm 6th grade in elementary school, the highest grade in primary school. I'm so excited! However, I don't have many close friends in my class now. Still, my teacher came newly to our school. She was in another school and she was quite young when we think of teachers. She was really kind, she didn't even said be quite even though we talked very much. I think I can have a good time I know some of the boys. Some are close with me. but I don't know the girls. I actually don't like the girls in our class. See you in class~!

 

Hello Joey!

You did a good job in writing about your day at school. I noticed that you are a good writer. Just be careful with your capitalization and punctuation marks. I뭗 like to know more about why you don뭪 like the girls in your class.^^ See you later! Have a great afternoon!

Karla

Today, I start going to elementary school again!

>>Today, I started going to my elementary school again!
We had a short spring break before starting school

>> We had a short spring break before starting school.

Now I'm 6th grade in elementary school, the highest grade in primary school.

>>Correct

OR>>I뭢 in the 6th grade in elementary school now, the highest grade in primary school.

I'm so excited!

>>Correct

OR>>I am so thrilled.
However, I don't have many close friends in my class now.

>>Correct

OR>>On the other hand, I don뭪 have a lot of friends in my new class.

Still, my teacher came newly to our school.
>>Still, my teacher is new in our school.

She was in another school and she was quite young when we think of teachers.

>>She used to be in another school and she is quite young compared to other teachers.

She was really kind, she didn't even said be quite even though we talked very much.

>>She was really kind, she didn뭪 even tell us to be quited even though we talked a lot.

I think I can have a good time.
>>Correct

OR>>I think this would be good.
I know some of the boys.

>>Correct

OR>>I know some of the boys in my class.

Some are close with me.

>>Some are close to me.

but I don't know the girls. 
>> But I don't know the girls.

I actually don't like the girls in our class. 

>>Correct

OR>>Honestly, I dislike the girls in our class.
See you in class~!

>>Correct

OR>>See you later!